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You have --with-helpurl="/usr/share/doc/$name/docs" --with-protobaseurl="/usr/share/doc/$name/docs", but have not specified $name. Please fix.

Also in package() you use the unspecified $name.

Package's name is white_dune, so what is the sense of --with-uninstallcomment="pacman -R wdune"? wdune is not the package's name ...

Why is firefox a makedepend?

Have you really checked which makedepends are really needed?

And are some of them maybe a real dependency, and not only a makedepend?

Please invest some time to make a quality PKGBUILD.

Just a suggestion: You could consider adding the documentation: http://wdune.ourproject.org/docs/index.html -- either directly (and adding `provides=("white_dune-doc=${pkgver}"), or making a split package where the other one is the documentation package.

Also installing the README*-files to /usr/share/doc/white_dune/.

You have an empty prepare()-function. Consider removing it.

Same with check()-function.

In makedepends, you have many things which are not needed, since packages from the base and base-devel groups are assumed to be installed.

This includes e.g. gcc and fakeroot.

You also have gcc twice.

You also have sometimes extraneous space at the end of the lines, which is bad style.

$url should point to the project's website, not the file do download, e.g.

url="http://wdune.ourproject.org/"

$pkgdesc shoud not contain the package name. Also, it could be a bit more elaborate. E.g.:

pkgdesc="A graphical VRML97/X3D editor, simple NURBS/Superformula 3D modeller, animation tool, and VRML97/X3DV commandline compiler."

arch=('86_64') is wrong, it needs to be arch=('x86_64').

Also, sure that not also other architectures are supported?